Silent Moon

by Midnight Sun   Feb 14, 2007


Comfort I find in the silent moon
Living with her humbles me
Outside of her face I have no home
But inside of her I am free

She's been my mother of long ago
And my best friend in hard times
Without her I'm completely alone
What would I do without her light that shines?

Her tears cleanse my sins away
And save my soul from dark death
Without her soul I live in solitude
Honestly, there is nothing left

Sadly now she leaves me to rest
Her archenemy takes over the sky
But I know she'll come back to mother me
For if she stayed away I'd be left to die

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  • 13 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Pretty :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Smooth flow of words!!! I like it!!!....well penned...Keep it up!!! God bless!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 18 years ago

    by SilentRebuke

    Very cool, somehow reminds me of a native american speaking.... which is a high complement coming from me. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Is the enemy the sun?
    Just from what i gathered from the wording. I could be wrong.
    But excellent poem. Very fluid like and calming yet with some very deep meanings
    At least, thats what i thought, lol
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's a soothing poem...reminds me of the character Caleb from that story. I loved this line.

    Honestly, there is nothing left

    I thought that was really good. I enjoyed this one a bunch!
    Charisma*

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