Hurtful first love

by Kaila   Feb 15, 2007


So theres this boy who had my heart
But he broke it into two
Now this boy wants me back
Whats a girl to do

He made me miserable for weeks and weeks
I could not stop crying
And when people would ask "are you fine"
I'd say yes but i was lying

But they days we were together
Were the best I'd ever known
And it's funny how in such a short time
My feelings seemed to grow

Now when I see him down the halls
I get this pain deep inside
I'm trying to hide my feelings
But the question is should I hide?

Should I hide the love
i had for you
Should I tell you now
My feelings are true....

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  • 15 years ago

    by JusTxXxLiezZz

    Great poem I feel the exact same way about a guy right now I'm caught in the middle but now I know. Couldn't have said it better!!!!!!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    MM. again. I can relate. Your poems seem to be very easy to relate to. I understand what you are saying in these pieces. Nice job. There were typos in a couple of places. Just read it over, and you'll find them.

    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    I think tht ur poems are good for people to relate to...which is a good thing isnt it =) it related to me..and u hav a good way to express ur self good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I can relate. you have a gift... you really do. and don't lose it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Wow, the poem is really nice, yet it seems kinda unfinished...iunno...mayb you cou;ld try doing a sequel to it, like what you/she decided to do