Tear a love apart

by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm   Feb 15, 2007


You say it's my fault..
Push away the blame..
Rid yourself of guilt..
To free yourself from pain.

But I can see you..
I find your faults..
I find every wound..
And pack it full of salt.

Now feel my pain..
Born the day you left..
Betray my very being..
Say it's for the best.

You fvck things up again..
You find another game to play..
Just to live a half life..
Every night, every day.

It's almost beautiful..
The way you spit at me..
Hating me with such passion..
Yet you could never see.

Now you dig me a grave..
As i lay in my new bed..
Lower my coffin..
With the devil overhead.

So you find some comfort..
When you lay down your head..
Deep inside you know..
Your the reason I'm dead.

I just ask you of one thing..
Spare a heart..
Next time you decide..
To tear a love apart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a bomb !
    damn good poem...
    wow i'm loving ur poems...
    keep it up
    love
    amy

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Oh my gosh.. once again.. a beautiul poem filled with strong emotions and the perfect words to express those emotions...

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5 ... there isnt much else i can say.. haha. your really good. there is nothing i can really pick at to improve.. uhm.. damn. lol.

    great job. much like your other poem i have read..
    guess it really happen/hurt huh?

    --linds[[x]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was amazing.. I think that it should be placed undersadness instead of love though because I got a lot more feeling of isolation, depression, and lostness than I did of lost love. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by bobo2011

    Friggin good. i swear i wana be able to write like that. lol. love sam