Shh!

by RavishingEruption   Feb 16, 2007


I hear the footsteps on the floor
I hear the slamming of the door
Why can't the world just stop the sound?
We're spinning, crashing to the ground
Shh!

My heart is breaking with my silent screams
My feeling pour down my face like streams
I can hear my screams loud and resonating
My tears crash with the pain they are containing
Shh!

Life has stopped; I feel so cold
I guess this is punishment for being bold
My life is crashing all around
And it all ends with that fatal sound...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    One remarkable poem i have read yet today. Each word flowed in its own sentence. I find this poem sad, as well, touching. Very Well. 5/5

    -Sarah A.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This was an intresting poem. i know the feelin. buti did rate this a 4 cause is seemed kinda edgy when i was reading it.. but although it still was a good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    You deffiently have a way with words exellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This poem is so sweet dear. I found lucidity in this piece and your wordings are beautiful. Kepp up the great work. Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Your poems are smooth and contain good flow.

    i only found one error:
    My heart is breaking with my silent screams
    My feeling[s] pour down my face like streams

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