The

by amoxi   Feb 16, 2007


The goes to school to get away
The wishes and prays that she could stay
The would do anything to not go back there
Because there wasn't another day that she could bare
For her father beats her all night
Her mother left after the last fight
The wears clothes covered in from her last beating
Only to ger away is what the is seeking
The has no friends to confide in
For her father says that the is a sin
The prayed that one night he would kill her
And the would no longer have to call him sir
The prayed that she would die before she killed her father
And to the world she would no longer be a bother
Her father came in for his nightly beatings for her
The sat there and took it with extra struggle for the sir
He beat her a little too hard this time
And from above he heard this rhyme:
You went too far this time sir
But the pain was finally relieved from her
You will pay for your wrongings
As soon as this rhyme ends
She loved you and you killed her
Well sir
It's time to go
And you did all this for the was slow

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    This one struck a chord with me because i loved how you used "the" as the subject name..
    It was outstandingly thought out!
    You should be proud
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    This was great. awesome sentence structure. full of emotion. Loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Well it's an intersting story too,and do that stanza thing on that too,trust me it will work,your poem are really good,and i just saw you're new here,so welcome honey

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