by amoxi Feb 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I look and all around eyes were staring |
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Great poem. You can do a little editing on the grammar of some lines. But overall it was really good. Keep it up 5/5 |
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Ooh. very intruging! i loved it. so mysterious. it rocked |
by David
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The words to start off you use are not used often, great trait to have. |
by Cella Bella
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Alot of emotion... I liked it. But this line, "I walked away covered in and such", doesn't really make sense lol. |
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OH so much emotion, and so well put together. |