Guilt

by amoxi   Feb 16, 2007


I look and all around eyes were staring
Like they could see the weight i was bearing
I did everything wrong and nothing right
I couldn't walk away without a fight
I didn't mean to beat him up that much
I walked away covered in and such
I will always regret what i had done
But you cant take back one night i call fun
Of course it wasnt fun after he died
But fighting back isn't what he had tried
He laid there still and took the harsh beating
I was really drunk and he was seeing
He was surely going to die tonight
Because that was when i took out my knife

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Great poem. You can do a little editing on the grammar of some lines. But overall it was really good. Keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Ooh. very intruging! i loved it. so mysterious. it rocked
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The words to start off you use are not used often, great trait to have.

    the poem was moving, very.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Alot of emotion... I liked it. But this line, "I walked away covered in and such", doesn't really make sense lol.

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    OH so much emotion, and so well put together.

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