Sacrifice

by LithiumSacrifice   Feb 16, 2007


Sacrifice

How the lithium flows through my viens
I'll be your sacrifice
I will save you from your pains
Protect you from this life

Never will you have to kneel
Never will you fall
I will make it so you dont have to feel
The horror of it all

I will let you close your eyes
So you never have to see
When all of the light dies
You'll be safe with me

How the lithium flows through my viens
I'll be your sacrifice
I will take away all your pains
Just if you're a part of my life

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  • 18 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was beautiful, and really sweet
    5/5 it flowed gorgeously.
    i lovd it.
    luv gabriella

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job. I think it could be better if you add more variety and images to the vocabulary.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is amazing.
    The first stanza had me hooked and it just kept getting better and better!
    The imagery you used was fantastic, and I thought the flow worked very well.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Awesome. beautiful. i really woudlnt change anything about it, the flow is good. the wording is good.

  • 18 years ago

    by GreyWolf

    From the poems i have read you seem like a very loyal and protective person. great qualities for a friend. =]

    awesome.

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