Wow,i loved the flow, and the emotion, keep writing! i luvd it!
luv gabriella

Wow, non-rhyming isnt usually my type but i loved this, it was so perfect in its unperfection..beautiful flow:)

I liked this poem a lot it showed a lot of emotion ur a great writer keep it up

Wow wow wow 5/5 this poem is breath takeing I enjoyed reading it

Sometimes if we hold onto things for to long, they end up holding us back - so it may be best to just let go - amazing write 5/5

Very nicely done! It seemed you didn't keep a pattern towards the end I started to catch some rhyming, try and keep the same pattern and if the majority of the poem doesn't rhyme, keep the enire poem like that unless you're doing a pattern of one stanza rhyming and the other non rhyming. Overall very well done! 5/5
God bless

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That was very sad 5/5

Another very nice poem!
uhh... loved how you ended the poem!

"The girl can now breathe,
and she tosses this love away."

found that part powerful... :)

keep it up!

This was a very powerful poem. Very good job! The locket can be painful... Keep writing!

I would love to know who down rates!!!!

Definitely a great job, good wording and great idea. nice job 5/5

Hey, i have to say i really liked your metaphor you used, describing love as locket. This was a great idea, and you did a wonderful job doing it. The emotion was wonderful and the flow was ok. The neding was great and concluded the poem wonderfully. I was quite drawn into the poem from the begining. An excellent read, keep it up and thanks for your comment! xx

I liked the metaphor in this as well. Hey, and I wear that type of locket.
Great job.

I enjoyed this...5/5

but about my poem....the homeward bound thing meant that some of the guests were going home...haha idk it just ryhmed haha....and the hay thing was like what the hay like what the heck you know haha....but thanks for the comment Ill make sure to make things clearer next time....comment back?!

This poem was really good I like this one alot! YYOU HAVE WHAT IT TAKES

It was alright I wished it woulda rhymed more but its alright 4/5

I liked it

Wow, deep meaningful. Very nice, I can relate to this, some people have to let go to be able to be themselves and more, very nicly written I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more

I really enjoyed this poem, u have talent keep it up, 5/5 i liked the way u expressd it by using to key as a locket very powerful. xxtake carexx

Wow really nice poem!
love how the locket symbolizes the past love...:D
great job