Why did it have to be you?

by callmecrazy   Feb 18, 2007


Haven't you caused me enough pain,

cant you let my soul rest in peace

I cant take it anymore, the more I see you the more my heart breaks to pieces, the more I think, the more my writs swell up in pain.

The blood rushing to the floor, the knife getting sharper, the pain deeper .

The tears racing down my face hitting the floor like rain, the marks from the needles don't go away,the bruises just getting darker the pain deeper, minds racing with thoughts of the end.

I will be long forgotten, the pain will be gone, off to another place where pain doesn't exist, to the peaceful place my soul can rest..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I hope that you don't have to go through this though. Keep on writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Yes you need to put this poem into paragraphs. if you do this this would be a great and intruiging poem.

    your first poem so i have to give you a 5. submit more. ill comment on them.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It looks more like a paragraph than a poem, maybe you could put it in more of a poem format.

  • 17 years ago

    by atv

    WOW!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXx3moBabe1507xXx

    Awwww 3 words...or is it 2...wait..1..2..no its 3...I LOVED IT!! keep it up...write more poems...lol

    *~Christina~*