A Lonely Road

by jarrod   Feb 18, 2007


A lonely road
is always walked alone.
though we all travel this road,
we choose to walk alone.

If someone has fallen
we may offer help.
if we have fallen,
we make and take no help.

this darkness is consuming.
this path is addicting.
this road is lonely.
this depression is won.

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  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Awesome. i love poems that are so potent in few words. i have a lifetime of experience with depression and all it entails. this gives a good visual reference to it. this is a solemn piece. i love it. i've really enjoyed everything of yours i've read. 5 for you! -beav

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    This darkness is consuming.
    this path is addicting.
    this road is lonely.
    but this depression won't win as long as we don't want it to :) (that's how I say it)

    thanks again Jarrod for sharing your thoughts with us! =)
    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. I have been on that lonely road for a long time now. Very well written. Take Care Cindy

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