Silence noise

by Boy   Feb 18, 2007


Somewhere far from my eyes sight
I try to see you but my eyes turned
back With tired hopeless from ways

Ways are alone with foggy rain
Footprints end in the ways
I see lonely in my heart

Heart fights with my feelings
Feelings blame on my emotions
Emotions comes in my eyes
eyes wet with drops

drops are mixed in rain
thus nobody can see my pain
then I close my eyes and
think about her and wish to
never open again in this
silence noise

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    The imagery and the metaphorical content in this piece is really worthwhile to mention. The word choice is beautiful and the way words strung is awesome. 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem
    loved readin this
    so much depth & pain in this
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Amazing poem 5/5 i loved it. XxX thanks 4 the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really beautiful poem n sad too!!! 5/5

    GOd bless u

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    I hope your heart sings again with love. Beautiful yet sad poem. Wishing you all the best. Take care your friend Cindy

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