Death is my only Saviour.

by emptysole   Feb 21, 2007


Look into to my soul,
its the deep dark hole.
unable to find the bottom,
my true feelings have turned rotten.
hurt and pain has been my friend,
they will be with me till the end.
I don't care for me,
so please just let me be.
I have fallen many times,
true release is in my rhymes.
it releases my pain,
I know it will happen again.
misery is my promotion,
and the pain shows the commotion.
let me cry these tears of failure,
because death is my only Saviour.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

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  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

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    by KemistryKia

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