She's Dead

by Curry   Feb 24, 2007


He broke her heart today,
Now shes sitting here not knowing what to do,
Not knowing what to say,
Somehow she needs to make all this pain go away.
She doesn't understand what she did,
For him to hurt her like this.
She can no longer take it,
She cant stop thinking of him.
So she takes the knife,
And slices her wrists again and again.
She feels she has no reason to keep on living,
She just wants it to end.
Cutting her wrists isn't helping the pain like it should,
It isn't making her feel better like she knows it could.
Theres a puddle of blood on the ground,
Suddenly she stops and looks around.
She spots a gun laying on the floor,
Now she knows she wont have to deal with this pain anymore.
She grabs the gun and points it towards her head,
"Bang!"....Shes dead.

Written by:Curry on 2.9.07

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Hmm, it's a pretty cliche poem. I liked the rhyming and flow though.

    Good job.

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Confused Queen

    Dang that waz truely touchin great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Julienne

    I like how you seemed to get inside the mind of the girl... i hope you are ok, if this is from personal experience, but yeas it was a very well written piece and the words just seemed to flow, so congratulations on such a fine piece of writing... 5/5 keep the good work going!

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the imagery in the poem! :) anyway we have the same ending in one of my poem hihi! :) good job! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Aww this is such a sad poem! I don't like poems about suicide. But good write.

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