1st 2 verses of a poem (let me know what you reckon)

by Nats   Feb 25, 2007


He promised to love me forever
"Until the stars burn out," he said.
Well I guess the stars must be gone now
For the love he once felt is dead.

He said that he would love me
For "forever and a day"
"Forever" must have been two days ago
For his love has flown away

Yeah.... that's all i've got so far.... not too sure how to continue with it, comment it and let me know what you think please!! also, if you have any ideas on how to continue it, let me know!!

nats xx

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