Taste of Sins

by Fsams   Feb 28, 2007


In the world lives he worst
He does evil and he boast
Deal with drugs and that all
Till he hears his final call

All that had he won
False mischief all that done
And the veil had he worn
Torn and blown would have gone

Deceived he in the world
Be deceived then by God
In hell he be lain
Shriek and shout he in pain

Neither would he survive
Nor die of hunger
Stink his nose, rotten his food
Drink and food, bleed he would

On mercy would he plead
None of pleads be in heed
Taste of sins he would see
Forbidden and forgotten he would be.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Your he's don't make any sense! Maybe that is the way you wanted it but:

    In the world lives he worst

    It's not making sense .. how about

    In the world he lives the worst

    Or something.. maybe thats the style you were going for idk.. but none of them make a lot of sense.

    Other than that .. you did a really great job. Just fix them 'he's' and your good to go.

    I really like this part though:

    On mercy would he plead
    None of pleads be in heed
    Taste of sins he would see
    Forbidden and forgotten he would be.

    Great Job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was unbelievable. it was so true and you expressed it so well. i loved the way you created such a strong image in my mind. great work. 5/5

    On mercy would he plead
    None of pleads be in heed
    Taste of sins he would see
    Forbidden and forgotten he would be.

    my absolute fave lines^^

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    It rhymes well dear. It is a very true poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Yes we are to face and taste the consequences if we commit sins.

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