Don't Move On

by BrixGoesxRawr   Mar 4, 2007

We're crazy in love; like one of those forbidden romance movies.
So incapable of being indissoluble [strings attached].
Spend our days at the beach & nights by the moonlight.
Compatible; most people say [so perfectly matched].

..... (Don't move on) .....

Love; so deep nothing can stand in the way.
Conquering all mistakes, everything that goes wrong.
Happiness overwhelms our souls [like a cup over flowing].
Spinning in circles around each other to our favorite song.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Laughing endlessly, splashing around in the water.
Whispering adulating words in each others ears.
Cuddling by the warmth of sweet scenting candles.
Keeping one another safe from their fears.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Noticing; it's not only fairy tales or made up stories.
Wishes, fantasies, prayers, & dreams really do come true.
The man that has always accompanied me in my dreams,
I've come to find, that man was you.

..... (Don't move on) .....

Brianna Carter
March 3, 2007.


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  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Very articulate and well structured piece, quite astonishing talent and maturity for one so young in years!
    Well done!


  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    I really liked this.
    Your wording and the way your wrote this added a different level emotion to the overall peice.
    Great job!


  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    I really like the way it was writen and i thought i was definatly one of your best poems, it really made me think and yea, another great great great poem by you for me to read

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Beautiful..just wow! I can't tell you that was just an amazing poem! Keep up the great work! You're an amazing writer. God Bless 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    An amazing poem yet again. I really liekd teh repition of the title, "..... (Don't move on) ....." between each stanza. I think this really extended the point your were tryign to make. The end concluded the poem wonderfully. It was a really really sweet poem, and the emotion was wonderfully displayed. the rhyming was good, as was the rhythem of the poem. Keep writing , you have lots of talent! xx