Better off dead

by resisting reason   Mar 7, 2007


Let the fire inside you die
let your tears douse the flame
nothing inside you is right
live or die its all the same
you're to weak to fight me
the thoughts inside your head
open your eyes and you will see
that you're better off dead
so make a fist
and cut your wrist
drain it all away
heres your pills
now kill yourself
you're better off this way
drown your sorrow
so theres no tomorrow
drink it all down
end it all
paint the walls
this is your way out

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  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Nice work. i liked this poem, i can relate 2 it in a way, the cutting part not the pills. anyway ur poem made me remember about how i alwayz tried commiting suicide but god gave u ur life, he'll take it when he wants 2. dont force it.
    but overall i liked the way u wrote the poem. keep up the good work.5/5 =)

  • 17 years ago

    by josh mills

    Good job i loved it keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by megan

    This is real good, kinda depressing though. but still, i give it a 5.

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