Bullets

by memyselfandI   Mar 9, 2007


Hes made a decision,
One thats hard to make,
The barrel, obstructing his vision,
His life it soon will take.

He takes only a glance,
A look to his past,
He has only one last chance,
He knows the little good cant last.

Theres no turning back,
When the world attacks
He will fade to black,
Hope is what he now lacks.

He begins with the pull of a finger,
Hes started it, its almost done,
Not even a second will he linger,
A single bullet, it took just one.

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    by alone in the crowd

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Alot of emotion in this write.
    Great Job!
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  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    That was a well penned piece of literature! Nicely done and thanks for the comment! When you get the chance please check out more of my poems thanks!
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  • 17 years ago

    by lil miss music

    My friend would love your poem like me

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    That's pretty dark. I mean, in the sense of a life taken by ones own hand. But I can relate. Many people can.

    Well done. Brilliant poem...

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