Sacrifices of Freedom

by memyselfandI   Mar 21, 2007


Sand, clings to me, as we march on,
Sweat, coats me, as we cross the war zone,
Sadness, fills me, many friends gone,
Smoke, surrounds me, feeling so alone.

Regret, shames me, I would never leave,
Pride, reminds me, why I fight,
Exhaust, closes on me, I just want to breathe,
Reason, pushes me, Id die for whats right.

Adrenaline, fills me, the battle has begun,
Shock, stills me, my brother is dying,
Death, grips me, I know that its done,
Loss, news will come, a mother will be crying.

....Diplomacy is dying

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Nice topic and very good poem.
    5/5
    Keep it up...

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by lil miss music

    Btw scots rule. i hope you like my poem we cna't live on our own

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    Hey...u go to HP? what school?

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    I loved this one. I was really good and I love the way you showed emotion and help the reader live the experience. It was really good! Keep up the good work!

    @!Jezzika!@

  • 17 years ago

    by homebound

    Hey great job on this one...its different from a lot im used to. Nicely worded and really made me feel the emotions! I'm about to enter a new poem called Here so when you get the chance please read it

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