I Hate You [Shadorma]

by Kristina   Mar 9, 2007


I hate you.
You never liked me,
You used me,
Lied to me
And I'll never forgive you,
You're not a friend.

Copyright © March 03, 2007 - Kristina M

A Shadorma is a syllabic poem. It consists of 6 unrhymed lines, syllables going: 3-5-3-3-7-5

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  • 17 years ago

    by miranda

    I no what you mean, my friend do the same, i have done things i regret, and i cry, night over night.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    As the others said, short, yet powerful.

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  • 17 years ago

    by callmecrazy

    Short, but i deff relate to tht one.
    i hate when people are like that. they get what they want and then they leave grrr.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jens

    Love it
    Prolly cuz the samething happend to not to long ago.. But the person how did it to me wants us to still be friends :P

    Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Short, but gets the emotion across. I like it.