As We Dance

by BeautifulxMess   Mar 10, 2007


Listening to the music playing in our heads.
As we dance to the melody our hearts make.
Moving our feet in a rhythm soft and sweet.
After all this time I found love's not a mistake.

Under the stars we dance until they fade away.
Beneath the pale blue moon we kiss calmly.
Your hands find mine and you hold it to yours.
Love is all I feel when you hold my frail body.

The world stops for a moment in your eyes.
Everything disappears when you bestow a kiss.
Sweetheart, I'm amazed by your love you have.
You always show it in your everlasting bliss.

As the wind glides against our delicate skin.
Our love arises like a rose in a silent meadow.
For I will and promise to never let you embark.
As we dance, the stars let my burdens go.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara

    Omg! amazing poem girl! you have a real talent!
    "Listening to the music playing in our heads.
    As we dance to the melody our hearts make.
    Moving our feet in a rhythm soft and sweet.
    After all this time I found love's not a mistake."

    i loved this part, it almost made me cry! lol just beautiful----tara----

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    Such a relaxing and refreshing poem! keep it up! xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    WOW. This was amazing.. It flowed so well & the rhymes were great. Nothing seemed forced at all. The imagery & promise in this piece is just so wonderful & beautiful. You shouldn't change a thing.. It's absolutley perfect.

    Simply amazingly beautifully penned. :]

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This was so sweet! you conjured such lovely images in my head! wow! keep up the amazing work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good! i defiantly enjoyed reading this! it had so much emotion in it! the flow was very well. 5/5

    ~Kristina

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