Goodbye... [Double Essence]

by aDORKable x3   Mar 11, 2007


Goodbye left on deaf ears
Cries of pain; hidden fears

All sense lost; All hope gone
The cost of pain, forgone

The Essence, created by Emily Romano is a short, structured form of two-lines, six syllables each with an end rhyme.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow.

    This was very powerful & deep. What great meaning in such little words. The emotions were just.. wow, breathtaking.

    Greatly penned, darlin'.

    Bri [x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem babe, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

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