Lunar Eclipse (Collaboration)

by Angie   Mar 11, 2007


Lunar Eclipse
By Angela and Michael

Beauty in the sky
viewed with sparkling eyes
of two lovers on a beach

Shimmering silver obelisk
set in black tapestry
speckled with gemstones

Slowly being devoured
in a spectacle
of cosmic intrigue

Waves lap the shore
as darkness consumes
Night's Emperess

The tides ebb and flow
as the lovers await
the return of light

Bodies entwined
skyward gazes illuminated
tears glistening on cheeks

The median reached
dark shadow recedes
bright orb re-appears

Warmth in their hearts
as passion ignites
under the Lunar Eclipse

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, amazing piece, it has so powerful rhythm and it is simple beautiful. Imagery, atmosphere and every emotion is wonderfully expressed. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, the imagery in this poem is so captivating, so... breathtaking... Amazing collab, every stanza is flawless, the wording is excellent, and the atmosphere is somehow magical.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    I love nature poems!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by KT Mackey

    Very well written, nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by PS

    Beautiful and elegant. LOVE IT