Crystal labyrinth

by SEAN   Mar 12, 2007


Heavens essence descends toward earth
cascading over serene backdrops and wrists
what a perfect metaphor for a girl like her
what an intimate way to describe how she lives

as the lights those radiant beacons keep us conscious
and those serene humane gestures mesmerize our hearts

how our innocence on the 23 - 13 depleted
how it quickly mutated into sordid disdain
as if at this age you'd know how to treat me
to think you had the naivety to think i would change

amids a maze of insecurity and anxiety
the crystal like texture only obscures the path
in reminiscence i think i owe you an apology
but i think the divine substance that clogs my veins took care of that

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  • Wow its a really nice poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    I love your work, i really do. great vocab and descriptions in this poem, it is so original, i think you must have a raw talent, i cannot describe it anyother way

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Oh! I am the first to comment yay!! lol, anyway... i loved this one as well, you really have a nack of writing don't you lol. good adjectives. loved it. i voted it 5/5!!

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