Pause Speech.

by Unrequited   Mar 14, 2007


Pause speech
cold.
bury sweet
ash.
paint lovers
blue.
dip them
in the
sky.

resume speech.
currently
on mute.
melancholy.
fast-forward
complete.
life will
come
to an
end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Beautiful heartache.... excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Very very interesting. I like its simplicity. Yet, it also has depth. Nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow,
    "dip them
    in the
    sky."
    your poems are amazing, i didn't really get this one, but oh my gosh, if you painted your poems exactly as you write them on paper, they would be so beautiful... i don't know if you know what im talking about but
    5/5
    gabriella

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oooo..merzmorizing. "paint lovers..blue..dip them in the sky.." that is so artistic, i can just imagine it...

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