Write Away

Very original.
Im speechless.
Wonderful job.
<3

~A

Wow this is truly how a poet feels when they write great job!! i loved it another 5/5

laura

Kay, this may be my favorite of your poems!

=) this was good... i liked it alot. :) the flow was good, and the idea was pretty realistic. Half of us write to get rid of pain...you put it into words :)..

This is a heartfelt, touching poem and I think it is amazing. I made a few minor changes for flow. Take it or leave it, this would be a good one to enter in your contest.

My heart beats faster.
Blood rushing through my veins.
I touch the pen to the page
And I write away my pains.

I close my eyes
And let the ink flow.
I try to make sense
Of [all that OR these things that] I know.

My head starts spinning.
My ears start to pound.
I'm off of the planet;
I can't touch the ground.

I let out the dreams
I've held onto so long.
I try to make right
[in] this world full of wrong.

This poem has wonderful flow. You'd do good in one of my contests.