We Danced (Rictameter)

by Angie   Mar 16, 2007


We Danced

we danced
gazing into
each others loving eyes
wrapped within a cocoon of arms
to a silent melody of our own
swaying slowly, holding tightly
as others passed on by
wondering why
we danced

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautifully written poem. It has superb atmosphere. Simple but yet very powerful. Repetition of the first line is very effective. It is really touching and emotional. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Amazing poem, it makes me read it again and again I almost feel the passion of that dance...

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Thank you so much Sunshine, your comment means so much to me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Thank you my love.... and we can dance every day!

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