Death of my friend

by Daisy   Mar 18, 2007


I watched as she died,
So much I cried,
The death of my friend,
Will haunt me to my end,
So sad it was,
All because,
I went off in a huff,
She laughed,
And went away, she had enough,
Under the car she went,
Over her I bent,
All because she wanted a cent.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    This is sad and very hard to take in but i think you did good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Crahan

    You are a pretty good writer, keep working at it! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Unamed

    Hmm..it was ok..not sure if i loved it tho...
    this would have been really good, longer, with more emotion and power added to it.
    work on it hun, then let me know and i'll reread it
    Aly

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