Wow, this was a really good poem. That really describes how people feel when they are in love. We need that other person so bad, that when we are not with them, we feel like nothing. You did a great job on this one my friend.
Your English grammar and tense is incorrect throughout most of the poem, is this because English isn't your mother tongue?
It was a good effort though. It was a simple write, and the parts I could understand were emotional.
Thanks for sharing.
You're so talented poet! I like everything about this piece, every stanza is greatly written and the ending is excellent.
My favorite stanza is:
-For one second
I decide letting you go
I saw million of grieves embracing me-
I'm adding this poem to my favorites :)