by BlueDreams Mar 21, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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World of peace comes |
by Fsams
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First of all I wanna thank you for writing this piece. |
by becca
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This is so true! the meaning and moral of the poem is so clear and inspiring and this gives it such depth. a great write! thankyou xXx |
by Ann Stareyes
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Very inspirational Bert...a wonderful & heartfelt write as always.....wonderful job.... |
by Angie
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Well, it certainly is good to read you again my friend. Hope all is well with you. This write is quite powerful and brings forth a message that the world needs to hear. Very inspirational indeed. Welcome back my sweet and hope to read more of you soon. Do drop me an email when you get the time. |
by Bethan
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I liked this poem however certain parts weakened it I felt, such as 'War and strife wonâ??t fail to persist.' I think would sound better pherhaps as desist. And a couple of other lines I felt were slightly long. Overall though a beautiful positive message, true sentiments and a good wake up call. |