Ruby Red Rains {Haiku}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Mar 21, 2007


Of ruby red rains --
Oh, to arise such beauty!
Peace falls among us.
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Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three
unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually
written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Such a beautiful haiku. The imagery was beautiful. The whole poem was beautiful not much i can say to this really magnificant piece. Well done ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    Hm, it is too bad that haikus must be short 'cause i believe you could really have expanded upon this. Anway it wasn't bad and considering how much was said in three lines you exceeded my expectations. 5/5.