Aching words

by Boy   Mar 23, 2007


Alas
my love could not fill love in her heart
my shining eyes could not melt her heart
my strong arms could not hold her forever
my lips could not touch her lips always

Alas
my body could not meet to her body
my wishes could not same to her wishes
my unspoken words died in my heart

Alas
I am incomplete without her
I could not meet her in this world
I could not be meet her in second world also
I could not be died in her arms

Alas
i have no dreams to my life now
I cannot die when I want to
I have no importance for her
I was not in her hand lines

Alas
I could not feel her silence of breathe
her eyes showed me hate always
her smile was not for me
her everything was not mine

Alas
I am all alone in my life
I have no choice now
I wish I would die
I still love her

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  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    You are good at writing sad poems.. I really feel in this poem you describe your feelings very hopeless.. I think it is pretty normal to have this black/white world for a while after breaking up.. And it takes a lot of time and power to fill that empty place in your heart again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    You are good at writing sad poems.. I really feel in this poem you describe your feelings very hopeless.. I think it is pretty normal to have this black/white world for a while after breaking up.. And it takes a lot of time and power to fill that empty place in your heart again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Thats so heartwrenching..
    When the person we love leaves us, it's always so hard to carry on. But there's always someone who needs us so we much continue on with life.
    Stay strong
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. It really touched my heart.

    Alas
    I am all alone in my life
    I have no choice now
    I wish I would die
    I still love her

    Hope you start to feel better soon.
    Thinking of you
    Your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very well written, its really good. love it. xxxxxxxxxxxx

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