Is it alright?

by Miu   Mar 23, 2007


Is it alright to forget the pain?
Is it OK to live without the stars?
From night skies
tears falling into eyes
and you smile.
Staring back at me
Holding me tight.
Through the lonely night.

Is it alright to smile?
As the tears falling to the ground?
They fall without any sound
n looking up into eyes
Stopping the lonely cries
As the sun slowly falls.
Bringing out the night skies.
We smile.
Smile, till the faces of us disappear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is really good, written so well, made me go awww...this is great stuff!!! again a perfect word choice!!!
    5/5
    - ali xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    I wish i had that.= (great job this is very good writing.5/5

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Just three words i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Excelent, you are really a talented writer i love reading ur poems the way u write just makes the poem so perfect very good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Awh I love it! The use of words was good. I read it twice cause I like it a lot lol XD

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