WHEN IS THE LAST TIME YOU MADE ME HAPPY

I like it...its short but so very true...i no what u mean its like you really like someone and they hurt u so bad...i really love this one 5/5!!

Wow,, this poem is rele good,, it is short in form but long in meaning. rele good,, 5/5
Janaynay

P.S. ty for the comment on my poem

The poem is short but the emotion is strong, the word choice is briallant the flow is smooth, and the message is clear you did an excekkent job on this, 5/5

Wow... not what you normally think of with a love poem, but it totally fits. Excellent job; very nice ending with the question -- it makes your audience really think about the topic.

5/5

[tragic]

Short but straight to the point, i like it good job.