Sunshine

by Laura   Mar 26, 2007


Bright
Golden
Sunshine rays
Heat beaming down
Fiercely hot at noon
Enveloping the air
Breathing life into nature
That survives off the warmth of light
Until morning when you will rise again

My first ever attempt at an Etheree poem!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautiful poem, imagery is so powerful and you created wonderful atmosphere with so little words. I truly enjoyed in this piece, it is short but very effective and excellently written. Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    First attempt, eh? A first attempt gone terrible awesome!!!! I love this...GREAT STUFF LAURA!!! Your writing has definitely developed into something wonderful!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very well done Laura. :-)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beauuutiful!
    I think you did an amazing job, especially for your first attempt.
    I loved the imagery in this, it made me feel very relaxed and peaceful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Laura
    What an uplifting Etheree ! Beautifully mastered and delightful.
    What a wonderful poem to read this Easter morning ...
    I am hoping we will get some of that beautiful sunshine today.

    Take care and Happy Easter Laura
    Luanne

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