UNKNOWN WORLD

by Breeeezie   Mar 26, 2007


Her life is unknowen
she walks the halls
listening to her music
you see her but you don't hear her
you think you know her
but theres 1 thing you don't know
shes like a butterfly locked in a cage
with hungry bugs around her
waiting to take a bite
wondering where she can go
wondering what she can do
shes only looking for one thing

YOU

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ur a very intresting poet. but i rly love it. maybe u can come check mine out. and tell u what i think. im gonna keep reading urs thoough. i love what ive read so far and i cant wait 2 read more.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    I gotta say the ending was a suprise...well for me it was...good job

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I like this one. i can feel something coming out of it. i think its because i can relate to it in a way. great job. keep it up. i hope to read more from you. and thank you for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Just being picky and me, there is a typo in 'unknowen'--UNKNOWN.

    anyway. I like the similie of the butterfly in a cage. That just gave the poem more depth. The length of the poem could be a tad longer, but it's find the way it is. This girl you write of, I love her mysteriousness.

    =] {i'm not gunna rate because i cant give you neither a 5 nor 4, so your in between} <3 take care.

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