You mean more---

by Tara   Mar 26, 2007


I love you,
more then the air i breath,
more then the word i speak
more then the pain i feel,
more then the water i drink, or the food i eat,

or the world around me...i love you cause i know you made all of these things. all these thing that people based their lives on---i love you God, and you now that full well.

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  • 18 years ago

    by STEVE

    Beautiful very meaningful 5/5 Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by becca

    A beautifully written and really touching poem! it was so simple yet so full of meaning and truth! i loved it! keep it up! xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "I love you,
    more then the air i breath,"

    Excellent opening, it immediantly showed the depth of the feelings and the rest of the poem followed suit
    A wonderful tribute!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara

    Ya i am totally christain! lol <3

  • 18 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Ur poem was cute, i swear... u r religious?

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