My Pain, My Suffering, My Torment

Oh yea forgot to tell u so u don't feel too invaded but this is Arianna just diff. screen name.

I totally understand the pain coming with who u r. my mom read one of mine and she kept watching me when i had ANY sharp object like i was actually going to kill myself. so now she is restricted from reading my poems and ur welcome for the comment.

Heya. Thanks for your comment.
Its not that this person was treating me this way, it is just the way that I feel inside, you know? Although it may not seem like it, she was actually trying to protect me.
Its alright, it was fine how you expressed it. I couldn't have expressed it any better than that. I don't know about the "very deep" part, though I don't really get the same impression as everyone else who reads them does. As for the pain, I guess that just comes with being who I am.

Love isn't that bad,
Someone treating U that way is sad,
They should be close and careing,
They never mind sharing,
They treat U as though U R the only 1 there,
They won't give U more than U can bear.

P.S. sorry i wasn't sure how else to express that. Also all U'r poems R very deep and I like them except that U have to endure that pain.