Lost Without Love

by Shadows Reign   Aug 20, 2007


Rampaging through my heart,
Thoughts of uncontrollable nature.
Emotions and feelings from within the dark,
All of which consume my stature.

I feel the hate rise up in me,
In the dead of night I leave.
I wonder out where you can't see,
Inside my shell I wait and bleed.

Slowly as I wait dying,
Only now do I see.
While I lay here, to myself I'm lying.
Darkness is all thats left in me.

Silently I wipe away a tear,
As I place my hands upon my head.
With no-one around to hear,
Since inside I'm already dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Inside my shell I wait and bleed.

    Slowly as I wait dying,
    Only now do I see.
    While I lay here, to myself I'm lying.
    Darkness is all thats left in me.

    Silently I wipe away a tear,

    i really like this part

    keep up the good writings

  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    "Rampaging through my heart,
    Thoughts of uncontrollable nature."
    A wonderful opening stanza. Such feeling and power comes from these words. The flow here is fantastic, an excellent write, one of your best. Greta xo

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNoTpErFEct

    I love this.. i really do