Whats wrong?

by Jochsey   Mar 28, 2007


Why wont you talk to me
Tell me what's wrong
I just wanna help
It wont take long

You sit there in silence
with that look on your face
I know something is up
We'll go to a quiet place

Lean on my shoulder
I'll listen to you
we are best mates
Just give me a clue

Is someone beating you up?
Or causing you pain?
If you tell me
I'll make them explain

I can help you
Please trust me
It will work out
Just like it used to be

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I havent been writing for a while and this is my first once since starting again, so its not too good.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Ur full of crap...what ones do you call s**t then?

  • 16 years ago

    by AmY

    If u say it isnt good when its awesome i wonder whats your good like. lol. i loved it. cool. keep it up. 5/5
    much love Amy

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Don't say that. this was so great. the poem was excellent and if i had something big to talk about i would talk to you. (yet i wouldn't lean on your shoulder. lol)

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    This is nice... i like it =]

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