This pain I feel inside

by Onoitsmandie   Mar 30, 2007


This pain i feel inside
the hurt that i cannot bare
the seathing screams of silence
fills my heart with much dispare

This pain i feel inside
not wanting to go away
killing me in my dreams
but i cannot stay awake

This pain i feel inside
shattering my broken walls
with each step i seem to take
the harder i will fall

This pain i feel inside
breaking me apart
tearing into my soul
ripping out my heart

This pain i feel inside
silence allaround
leave my broken body
lying on the ground

*i made this three days ago i wasn't sad really or depressed it just flowed out the tips of my fingers*
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  • 14 years ago

    by Leah

    This is sooo good, just watch for spelling mistakes girl! thanks for the comment on my new poem to :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Wow.. I wish poems like this one would flow out of my fingers. Not good to be sad but I have been depressed before I know how it feels many do. I always turn to my music to comfort me but even music makes the emotions come out. Nice to write about them and let them out of your system. You are a good poet I like this poem it flows smoothly and has a lot emotion in it. Excellent job! 5/5 Keep it up ^_^

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