Wrong Again

Hm. I liked the repetion within this.

I'm sorry to say, but your poems don't stand out to me and it baffles me why not. Your topics seem a little cliche... May I offer a suggestion and say try to make them about a cliche topic but not written in a cliche way. Make sense?

This wasn't too bad. You had a nice point to it.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 4.5

WOW once again amzingly strong!!! These are the kinds of poems that inspire me! I love how you said that. Not just one part- all of it! You kept it interesting and make it the perfect length. Aswell as making a GREAT point. This kinda reminds me how I felt when I wrote my poem "are you listening?" lol you should check it out. lol i would give you another comment. But dont pay attention to the grammar int hat one, lol that was before I learned about stanzas. Well thanks for the great read. Im adding you to my favorites.

God bless

~skittles

Hey, so omg i loved your poem, it flowed very eaily and even just by the title, it attrached me, and the poem was great on the inside to!

---tara

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

Aweh. I take it a lost relationship? Those suck, but you just got to keep your head up Darling and move on, because if he makes you cry in the first place, than he's not worth it. Anyways, I loved this poem, it spoke truth about how it feels to have a broken heart, keep up the great writing.

5/5(:

"Take just one moment...
Hear the sentences you speak,
You think I'm such a strong person,
But your words, they make me weak. "

^^ I loved those lines.