I'm going to

by tearstainedlies   Mar 30, 2007


I'm going to cry
until my eyes wont anymore
I'm going to scream
until my throat gets sore

I'm going to hurt
until my heart disappears
I'm going to let go
of all of my fears

I'm going to cut
until i find another way
I'm going to be silent
until i find the right words to say

I'm going to hide
until someone finds me
I'm going to be depressed
cause that's all i 'll ever be

I'm going to finish this life
cause there's no other way
i cant live a life
when i cant make it thought the day

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  • 17 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    At first when I started to read this, like the first comment, the ryhmes seemed very forced. But, somehow you made it work. I can relate to the feeling you described, and I love how you were very blunt. If you may take my advice; stay strong, you'll make it.
    Great work.
    5/5
    :D

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Very good. I like the consistancy of using the title in the piece. The rhymes were slightly forced, but I liked the way you used them to move the poem onword rather than just rhyming to rhyme. My favorite stanza was:

    I'm going to cry
    until my eyes wont anymore
    I'm going to scream
    until my throat gets sore

    I liked your poem. Good Job 5/5

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