Blood, Sweat, & Tears

by Echelon Eric   Mar 31, 2007


On this desolate earth I shed my inners
Though no matter where I go, what I do, I'm a terrible sinner
The pain all around us, physic or emotion
The blood, sweat, and tears form oceans

Blood, crimson red that I shed, flesh is cut
Sweat, by heat and fatigue seeps
Tears fall under despair and rage, you just weep

Like my irritated skin, my inner thoughts bleed
Tears so hard to form, the emotions build
The sweat I put into my friends and passions, love I don't deserve
Why do they feel wasted?
Things are changing, I try to preserve
But I can barely taste it

Love, friendship, hope, hardwork, anger, and fears
They all shed and reflect
Blood, sweat, and tears

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amnah

    Well that is a good poem, i really liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    That is really good! Omgosh.. I didn't expect that to blow me away like it did. Don't get me wrong, you're a wonderful writer and all your work is amazing, but I really didn't expect it to be that good! I loved it!

    ~Casey J