Great poem!
I loved it.. My favourite part was:

Fall in love with me for your heart is mine
On this beach, we lie on it's sandy shores
Together with our fingers intertwined
Stay here with me I am forever yours

Great rhyming .. The flow is great, too.

You did wonderful job, as always.
I love the Idea.. That boy, that girl likes/loves, is in her dreams, their happy together there. How sweet.. :)

Lol.. Very good job anyway

Keep it up

Take care

Mm. this is beautiful. i really enjoyed that. i put myself in place of the girl. *sigh* and just pictured my guy. this was incredibly sweet. i think it deserves a 5/5.

Unusual and sweet. It's different. I like it...ummm what is a sonnet exactly??? Heard of it, but wasn't sure of it's structure or purpose. Anyhoo...good job. Nice rhymes!
Charisma*

That's soo pretty. the poem is almost unresistable alone. i lov

This is incredible! 5/5 And I hope we stay in touch!

I loved this, it's so romantic, but not so romantic that it's sickening. I love your work, your a very talented writer :) this is sorta funny because today at school we where studying sonnets :p

amazing job! it blew me away 5/5

Great poem. very sweet! i love how each line rhymes. very great! 5/5

xoxo kisses

Really wonderful poem. like Reese said, it is romantic without being overly so...actually, for some reason it read as a little dark to me, but I re-read it three times and couldn't tell why. Hmm...

Wow, this was so beautiful. It's very rare that I read a good love poem, this is one of those occasions. I loved your diction, everyline fit together perfectly. Yous use of visual and dactyl imagery did quite a bit for this poem. Amazing work.

--Steph

"A sudden kiss brushing against my lips
Passionate and romantic is love's game
Sensitive skin caressed by fingertips
A loud whisper as you call out my name"

great lines. This poem was wonderful. Your such a good writer. keep it up! 5/5

~Chelsea

AWH. That was so cuuute, I loved this one. The flow was great, the rhymes worked well and the emotion really shone through every line. The imagery and descriptions you created were beautiful and I think every girls dreamm. I loved this poem hunni, great job. 5/5

Hey,
First of all thank you for your comment, you know after i wrote that poem and read it through, i acctually thought... wow this is going to seem really ironic considering my username. Lol. But anyways im acctually not contemplating it anymore but everyone knows me as contemplating suicide now so i dont know. Lol. But i do wonder what people who dont know me think when they see my username...
Anyways now back to the subject of your poem, I like sonnets, thought i dont think i could write one. Anyways your poems title, i thought itd be a romantic girl next door type of poem. The acctual content of this poem was quite sweet and yes romantic it makes me feel of a dream becuase nothings acctually like this. I like the rhyme's youve used, they didnt seem forced at any point. I like the alliteration of "Sensitive skin" it works good. So yeah overall an enjoyable read! Keep it up! xx

How did I not notice when you posted this?????? This was such a sweet and tender poem Darien :) It made me all warm and fuzzy on the inside, you are such a talented writer!!!!!!

I loved that it was consistent.
But the ending seemed kind of forced.
I found the boyish charms quite funny. Lol.
It was a nice poem.
I love the flow of it as well.

Very nice althought when i hear the word Sonnet i think of hamlet or shakespear lol but overall nicely done. Keep it up man!

Wonderful write, I've never written a Sonnet before, well actually I wrote an Italian Sonnet once. But anyways, the poem was very beautiful and I loved your word choice. The flow and rhyme where good. Keep up the excellent work.

Peace, Joe

Another excellent poem.. filled with romance and passion.. you once again describe your emotions perfectly.. beautiful choice of words to describe such a beautiful emotion.. wonderful work :D