To Our Friends

by Simply Josh   Apr 1, 2007


They're an inspiration on my life,
And I owe them deeply.
Too bad I didn't get to tell them,
Of the impact they made on me.

I just love the way she sings,
For it is filled with passion.
It encourages me also,
Which then leads to action.

And you know you want to follow,
Every time he leads.
For he possesses that skill,
That a leader needs.

To Justin and Bonnie,
Goodbye and thank you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    I like this, it's got a good length, i don't agree with 'Elemental Versifier' about the grammer error, sure it isn't correct, but we have poets rights, what we say, goes. But I do agree on the double use of passion. But overall I love it, I think the deication was cute at the end and I have rated it 5/5. Keep up the good work!!

    x

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Nice poem...loved that u dedicated it to ur friends...and dont worry...ull get friends before u know it
    a couple of things though
    a repitition of a rhyme weakens the poem
    For it is filled with passion.
    It encourages me also,
    Which then leads to passion.
    (passion twice)

    and "Of their impact unto me." is grammaticly wrong..it should be
    "how much of an impact they had on me"
    none-the-less....a 5/5 from me...nice work

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