A few Diamente poems

by cowgirlstar26   Apr 2, 2007


These were for my creative writing class last semester

Joy
exciting, happiness
Playing, laughing, jumping
parks, holiday, suffering, death
Fearful, tears, enduring
Loss, Painful
Sorrow

Hot
sizzling, sweating
Swimming, tanning ,tubing
Sunshine, summer, chilled, winter
snowmobiles, welch, skating
Freezing, chilly
cold

Sharp
Peirced, Painful
Cutting, shredding, bleeding
knife, razorblade, eyes, life
Personalty, love , school
pressing, Lifeless
Dull

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  • 16 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    I like the style...it's different and experimental. It's nice to see people using different poetry techniques.

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Very interesting.. I think you need another word between holiday, suffering...it just doesnt connect well..you know what I mean? Other than that I love it!