by Alisha Apr 4, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Out of my pen flows these words of pain and pride, |
by Nix
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I don't like the repetition of the word -anarchy-. Very unique poem with great message, you created excellent atmosphere and expressed how you feel in a good way. I enjoyed in it, it has very interesting rhythm. |
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Hmm this is indteresting.....good job on it =) |