by Baby Rainbow
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This is suchj an excellently written poem, it is very clever. well done you have so much talent x x x |
by Bryan
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It is the longest but one of the best acrostic poems i have ever read!!! has perfect flow and structure!!! i give this one a perfect 5!!!! keep it up jenna!!! |
by Espoirfailed
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I like this poem because acrosstics are normally forced but this poem is amazing with such flow, well done |
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You have a very nice vocabulary. I love how your write. Yet, this seems more prose than poetry. Maybe I'm just partial towards rhyming. I love your last stanza! And your title is AMAZING. Excellent work. |
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Wow...haha i dont know what to say other than this is amazing! It makes you feel, I love it!!!!!! |
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Interesting...a little hard to follow, but I liked it alot...I especially love the title and the ending...It kind've all comes together...I like it's uniqueness also...good job |
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I liked this one ALOT. |
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That was very good. Although I did get lost in the middle, the flow is unique, but you realed me in. I think you're on my fave list now. well done hun. |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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This was a awesome poem. this is one of the best acrostics ever. great write. 5/5. |
by Curry
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Awh this is real sad:[ |
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Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work. |
by xXallieXx
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I really loved this poem... continue writting and sharing your poems! a great thank you |
by Wallace
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Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5. |
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WOW this is fantastic , i love the layout of this poem and the whole idea.espcially the title its very catchy . keep up the great work |
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Wow, this is amazing. 5/5 |
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Great poem.. you did an awesome job with description.. i love it! real powerful! |
by Ashley
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I feel your style, you shouch check out some of mine |
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WOW... to make it acrostic must have taken time and effort. well done... i truly loved this xox |
by Wallace
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Excellent, I love it hot the first letter of each line made powerful statement, that is very unique and I can imagine it must've been hard, good work, keep it up. |
by Suri dawn
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O my goodness!AMAZING! Very well written. O my gosh. This is so good. I am not even kidding! |