I loved you, I lost you...

by sugarfacex   Apr 5, 2007


You took my life away that day,
You told me that you were here to stay.
You took me out and we had a blast,
You left me way to fast.

You said we would always be forever,
But now I guess we will never again be together.
You seriuosly hurt me and ripped my heart,
My soul is bleeding from you and me being apart.

You left without saying goodbye,
You said you needed to be alone but why?
You screamed that you wanted to be friends,
And that your good luck would be sent.

But all along I still love you,
Even after everything we have been through.
My hand is by your heart just like yours is in mine,
And I hope one day once again our souls will become entwined.

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Such a beautiful poem. So much emotion.

    Nice job!

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Good read i loved it keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this. I think the flow was great and you portrayed what you were saying really well. Good work~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Jezzika

    Wow babe... I love this one! Good Job! While I read this one there was only one thing in my mind... We are such alike in so many ways...

    I'm so sorry I haven't been able to talk much but somethings have come up.... I was about to talk to you when I got on that one day but like I said something came up and I was unable to... I'm very sorry... But do know that I'm not okay... one day everything will be but until then I'm living the life of a girl I don't even know.... Once again I'm sorry...

    Much love and the best of wishes!

    @!Jezzika!@

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